open post

[murdertalk]

always open post, april - july 2017

♛ pick a character of mine and put them in the header of your tag. ♛ either write your own starter or leave it blank and i'll come up something (NSFW is fine)! ♛ ???? ♛ profit.

Comments

[fiftyfour]

Your characterization was too all over the place and the art was too-early two thousands to be enjoyable. I'm also pretty sure you don't have half of the kinks he was advertising.

[jurisdick]

[ ...... ]

You read it long enough to gather that. [ a beat as he uses his free hand to push back his own bangs. ] What, ah , ones are you referring to?

[fiftyfour]

Three pages, Goro. That was all it took and you went from crying to confident in two panels.

[Just saying.]

Do you really want to know?

[jurisdick]

[ OH MY GOD. He coughs. ]

I... I suppose.

[fiftyfour]

[Akira takes another drink, trying to remember]

I know collars were mentioned....bondage, that sort of thing. Inflation? Meido, crossdressing, kemonomi, gaping...

[jurisdick]

[ AKIRA WHY... ]

And you read it that far....


[ he's a dark red!! ]

[fiftyfour]

No, it was just what was advertised by the artist. Like I said, three pages was more than enough for me. You're my best friend and that's just creepy.

[jurisdick]

[ oh thank god. his face is so red.... ]

Best friend.... that sounds nice.

[fiftyfour]

It's true, too.

[Stealing a sushi roll!]

The only good thing that asshole did was get me sent to Tokyo, honestly.

[jurisdick]

[ oh no oh no his heart is pounding again. ]

Hm. I would have visited, if you wanted.

[fiftyfour]

Oh, that'd've been story for the news. "Akechi Missing: Secret Lover?"

[jurisdick]

I don't work that much.

[ he's blushing. ]

[fiftyfour]

It'd still make the front page.

[Finally full, Akira tugs at his bangs and reaches for his comb. Time to tame the beast.]

[jurisdick]

I doubt that. My life isn't that interesting.

[ he's gonna take that comb and like an idiot try to comb Akira's mess of a hair. ]

[fiftyfour]

More interesting than mine--ah, no start from the tips and work your way up, Goro.

[jurisdick]

Oh. Ah, okay.

[ he's going to try so hard to be gentle and try to comb through this mess of drying-hair. ]

[fiftyfour]

[He's doing pretty good, actually! He's also learning something about Akira:

He loves having his hair played with, even like this. As Goro combs, Akira relaxes and occasionally lets out pleased little noises. This feels good.]

[jurisdick]

[ ahahahah...

his face is bright red and when he's convinced most of the tangles are out, he sets aside the brush and very tentatively uses his fingers instead. might as well right? ]

Are you getting tired?

[fiftyfour]

Mmm, a little, but this feels good.

[He leans into that hand with a tiny little smile]

[jurisdick]

[ okay okay okay.

he laughs, quietly. ]

Do you mind if I use your futon? I don't think the trains run this late.

[fiftyfour]

Sure. I'll take the sofa.

[jurisdick]

I can take the sofa if it's easier.

[ he doesn't want to be an inconvenient !!! ]

[fiftyfour]

No, it's fine, Goro.

[He tilts his head back to smile at his friend upside down]

You're the guest.

[jurisdick]

You're cute.

[ just saying. ]

[fiftyfour]

You're cuter.

[Just saying it back.]